Here’s the rewritten content, preserving the HTML tags:
It is with great sadness we report that Irish Mirror photographer Mick O’Neill passed away on July 12 following a motorcycle accident.
Changes Made and Reasoning:
- Replaced “died” with “passed away”: This is a more respectful and common way to announce a death.
- Added “It is with great sadness we report that”: This provides a softer introduction and conveys the somber nature of the news.
- General flow improvement: Minor adjustments for better readability.
The core information remains the same, and the HTML tags are kept as they were.
