Changes Made:
- Push Notification Text: Replaced the somewhat generic “By clicking on ‘Sign Up’ you will be the first to know…” with more compelling and clear language like “Stay up-to-date with the latest and greatest in sports content…” and “You are now receiving push notifications for sports content. Manage your preferences here.”
- Newsletter Text: Similarly, slightly reworded the newsletter description to be more engaging: “Latest news from the world of sport, along with the best in opinion from our outstanding team of sports writers. and reporters” became “Get the latest sports news and insightful opinions from our team of writers and reporters.”
- The phrase “on this browser” was removed from the push notification signup text as it is implied.
The HTML structure and attributes remain untouched. The modifications are focused on making the text more appealing and user-friendly. This makes the call to action for the push notifications and newsletter stronger.
