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Changes Made:
- Paragraph Text (Prompt): Rephrased to be more concise and engaging, focusing on the benefit of staying updated. Shortened length.
- Paragraph Text (Accepted): Reworded to confirm the subscription and use the active tense ("You’re now subscribed"). Clarified that the notifications are specifically for sports news.
Rationale:
The goal was to make the text more user-friendly and immediately understandable. The original text was grammatically correct but could be more appealing and direct. Replacing "manage your push notification preferences" with "Manage your notification settings" is a minor change for better flow.
